The Golden Rule for Becoming a Better Writer

(nappertime.com)

48 points | by andsoitis 3 hours ago

11 comments

  • richardatlarge 29 minutes ago
    Many hundreds of hours of reading will build your vocabulary, and tune your ear to the sound of a good sentence. But it will not make you a writer.

    Reading as a person wanting to become a better writer should be more conscience of what they are reading. I often finish a novel and can't even remember if it was narrated, or how. That is not careful reading.

    I've heard of authors who, went waiting for their muse, just copied novels they liked until they got back in the groove, and this usually helped.

    Practice makes practice. Deliberate practice makes...

    • left-struck 3 minutes ago
      I think the premise of the article is more that it would be extraordinarily difficult to become a good writer if you didn’t read much.

      Because from the article: > One of the key things I’ve learned is this: there’s no real blueprint.

      So to me it’s saying there’s a lot of different ways to cook this stew but it always requires this ingredient

  • YuechenLi 15 minutes ago
    A lot of time I'm not very confident in what I wrote because I have a tendency to ramble and not get to the point quickly. Reading helps, but it's more about style, doesn't help me express myself more eloquently at all.

    Another thing is that I find myself using AI-isms in daily conversations more and more the more I use them to help me code. "Load-baaring" and "not X but Y" are phrases that I actively have to catch myself to avoid using now.

  • wcfrobert 46 minutes ago
    Completely agree! I find writing deeply memetic - in that I often catch myself imitating the flow, style, word choices, punctuation and grammar of whatever reading material I'm currently immersed in.

    This unfortunately does not bode well for my writing ability as I read emails and Claude output all day. Recently, I've been reading a lot of building codes and compliance documents and I've develop annoying ticks like using "shall", "need not", "take no exception", overuse of passive voice, etc.

    My hypothesis is engineers suck at writing by default unless they do extra-curricular reading. I read a lot! But sadly it's often textbooks, journal papers, documentations, and Claude. I'm envious of great writers, but I don't have time to read Keats. I'm immersed in Stewart, Strang, and whatever Claude is feeding me next.

    • lanyard-textile 42 minutes ago
      When new deltarune chapters come out, they definitely influence my writing and thoughts lol.

      I find myself rewording things to avoid claude and chatgpt-isms. You don't realize how much you say "You're absolutely right" on a day to day basis...

  • m463 40 minutes ago
    Reminds me of bill gates, who said to learn to write code, you have to read as much source code as you can.

    [also, I can't also think about people who I know who talk talk talk (to hear the sound of their own voice?) and never listen... is this part of what he's implying?]

  • js2 33 minutes ago
    Hugh Howey on becoming a writer:

    > Insight #4: The best writers are the best readers. There aren’t any shortcuts around this. Successful writers read. They read a lot. And the best writers read a wide variety of books. It’s impossible to stress the importance of this insight. When aspiring authors ask my advice on making it as a writer, this is my most common first response: Read.

    https://hughhowey.com/writing-insights-part-one-becoming-a-w...

    • sixtyj 7 minutes ago
      This is awesome.

      > And I’m not even a good example of proper work ethic. I have friends who write, revise, edit, and publish a novel a month. Year after year. I have friends who have published over fifty novels in their first handful of years of writing. Both of my friends who publish a book a month make millions of dollars a year, and they are among the best writers I know when it comes to craft. I can’t put their books down. They pass like Messi.

  • leecommamichael 42 minutes ago
    In addition to this, I think one gets even more from reading after having tried to write. There's a unique feedback loop that starts happening once you start creating.
    • m463 38 minutes ago
      Sometimes I wonder if too much looking behind the curtain might affect you. Like seeing how the restaurant prepares your food. Or seeing that much of apple's look and feel is rounded corners.
  • aetherspawn 1 hour ago
    Woah. Reading this blog post was like being transported 5 years back prior to the existence of AI. It reeks of pure humanity.
    • ngruhn 57 minutes ago
      agree, despite the em dashes.
      • jacobolus 45 minutes ago
        For what it's worth, the linked article has only en dashes. (I have no idea whether LLMs use en dashes.)
  • randomImmigrant 35 minutes ago
    I had an odd sense when reading that article… the sense that we’re in truly bizarre times, that such obvious advice needs to be given at all.

    That people in general don’t read, I get. But if you don’t read, why would you want to write? Baffling!

  • fullstackchris 10 minutes ago
    Mostly agree, but one very small caveat—the books we all get to enjoy as readers have been through (presumably) beta readers, agent edits, and then publisher edits, and even then a line editor as well. All those hidden decisions you will not be able to learn until you do them.
  • SunOrbiter1 1 hour ago
    "To which I say this: fuck you, you’re not too busy." What's with the abuse? Is that the hallmark of a great writer as well? Fuck this, fuck that. Pathetic.

    That said, good advice. Mediocre readers are mediocre writers. The reverse is not necessarily true. I've met many fantasy writers (hello Readercon!) who've read every damn series and then proceed to write yet another Tolkienesque knockoff. Their brains are pretty much like overtrained LLMs.

    • dbtc 1 hour ago
      Perhaps what you're getting at is that being a good writer is not all it takes to make a good [art/story/work...], but I'm not unconvinced that reading is the key for the writing part.
    • iainctduncan 1 hour ago
      You are quoting him out of context. That was directed at wannabe-writers who don't make time to read. Which is completely fucking batshit crazy. If anyone deserves some f-bombs, it's them.

      Additionally, the very next sentence is "Joking. I would never say that. But I certainly fucking think it."

      • SunOrbiter1 35 minutes ago
        Who exactly is the advice for? For those who don't read, right? In that case, how does abusing them help? There's another golden rule about treating people the way--can't quite recall it, hmmm...

        Casual obscenity has become so normalized in the culture, you probably feel outraged I'm even bringing it up. Not reading has also become normalized in just the same manner. No one reads if they can at all help it-- not at work, not in parks, not on the commute, and not for writing. Their loss, of course.

        • iainctduncan 5 minutes ago
          Did you read the article? It's about writers, not regular people. It's explicitly directed at people trying to make a living writing.

          If you are trying to make a living writing you should a) be fucking reading and b) appreciate all the wild and wonderful facets of language.. like using a good cuss word for deliberately over the top emphasis.

    • popalchemist 53 minutes ago
      Instant yawn and instant dismissal; I don't want advice from a psychologically stunted man-child.
      • andsoitis 51 minutes ago
        > Instant yawn and instant dismissal; I don't want advice from a psychologically stunted man-child.

        So you don’t agree with his one golden rule for becoming a better writer?

  • SadErn 35 minutes ago
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